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Red.
Like the pumping blood,
Running through my veins.
Adrenaline at a high amount.

Orange.
Like the fire burning on my skin,
Such a soothing pain it is.
No matter how much it hurts.

Yellow.
Like the lightning,
On such a stormy night.
Though it's beautiful…

Green.
Like the plush grass,
I can only see in fantasizes of mine.
So comfortable it is…

Blue.
Like a clear sky,
Without the hateful words in the air.
Can't there be peace, for once?

Indigo.
Like the deep depths of the ocean,
Where all my hopes are buried.
Hopes of an accepting world.

Violet.
Like morning glories swaying in the breeze,
Completely free of all harm.
Just like how I wish I could be.
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A Darker Rainbowby DeidaraRyuuzaki

Literature / Poetry / Narrative / Free Verse©2010-2014 DeidaraRyuuzaki
I wanted to write a poem about a rainbow...so I did.
Honestly, I think this poem sucks...but, here you are.

Enjoy.
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Eva02Asuka Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
To write a poem about the rainbow with single comparisons for each of the 7 colors... and not just describe it as a whole... Thtat's difficult.
-And it turned out good.
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DeidaraRyuuzaki Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010   Writer
Ah, thank you.
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Eva02Asuka Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010
My pleasure. ^^
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